Ok...
Good stuff:
That motif on the guitar is really nice, and I like the sound of clean guitar with reverb.
Bad stuff:
It's repetitive as hell, as I said in the forums - there's completely no feeling to it!
MAKE SOMETHING HAPPEN!
Reminds me of one album by Placebo I listened to - ain't that bad, but... every track is the same. Same goes for this.
I understand you want vocals to be an instrument nicely mixed with other instruments, but they still don't need to be so damn monotone. It could be a loop of like two bars and it would be the same. Well, that bridge doesn't do that much anyway.
Sorry for the bad score, but I'm trying to be honest.
Good luck with new tracks tho;)